superlineman's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Jeb City part 3]

WHHHEEEEHEHEHEHEH!

duck...yay...i still wanted giant duck with laser eyes to be the 1st duck among our movies...CURSE YOU!

[Waffle X: Episode One]

amazing work man and some good anime refrences

u even used the to be continued thing from outlaw star which is the deciding factor in making me review. OS is sadly underknown and u used styling from it which now puts you in my flash artist god book (with andrew dickman and john and richie). CONGRATS TO YOU OH MIGHTY ANIME STYLING MAN!

[Jet Riders]

This was pretty good.

I definatly loved pretty much all the graphocs...but it was a shame that you dverything up so well and then just made the riders sticks. they didnt move much so im sure u could have puled off a better job with more detailed guys. anyway i thought this was pretty good...nice job. 4/5

-rik-

[Adult Swim Bumps Parody]

its finally on NG!!!

ill have those ads done eventually dude...till then..read whats there and enjoy! (when i get those ads done and in, i want co-author...lol)

Bkid001 responds:

co-author my ass, lol...nah just kiddin...well, you've seen the flash waay before it was submitted, so you knew what to expect...I also knew what to expect as far as what you voted on it =P...but yea, thanks for the review ^_^ (I will forever say that to people1!11!!1)

[LoZ: A Link to the Future]

this is awsome!

DAMN i love that song! the animation was unique too.

i love when he shoots his face with the sword (watch to understand)... and the fact that he just kinda lands on ganon is hilarious! great job! thissl get in and then some!

[Cookie man]

haha...this was a good 1st flash!

granted i had to have my headphones on max just to HEAR anything...and the art wasnt amazing...but u showed that u put enpugh work into it to give it a pass into NG...even if it isnt that popular...its still good for a 1st. good job man.

thejuiceizloose responds:

Yea, the sound gave me problems the entire time. All we have is a crappy microphone and a very basic sound program. So, hopefully in the near future we can aquire better equipment for the sound. Thanks for the critique.

[InuYasha: Too Much Ramen]

hahahahahahaha!!!

for a 1st submission...that was really good...im sure thissl pass...good job jesus!!! *prays*...o wait...its just a gold name....o well!

[AbsoluteZero]

this is really good for a 1st submission dude...

I WANA SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT DAMNIT!!!

ok now to tips...

i have 5 things on NG now so i kno what people like and dont like..
1-make the characters bigger....trust me, even if they get a tiny bit pixilly...still worth it

2-drop that landing noise...its too loud and it is a little distracting

3-heres a big one....USE ONION SKIN!!! i cannot stress the importants of fluid animation..people will rip u apart if they see shaky animation..this is ur 1st so im expecting u to get a break...

4-more action...u didnt have enough battle..

5-let the reader click a next button..some of the text went too fast....if u cant..just instant message or e-mail me...ill gladly help you

6-add a pre-loader...NG has one that is very easy to use...so use it..makes a difference...

hope to see more of this...wow...u just got my longest review...hope i helped ya out a little =) good luck!

TideofDarkness responds:

Lol yea, thanks.. I can use all of the tips i can get. Still trying to learn some of the basics.. I really need to start to read up on action script. And I'm pretty sure I did add a preloader..

and i might take you up on your offer

[Sketchez]

it was good....

but it didnt really go anywhere...probobly wont pass but i voted 4 to support its uniqueness......good luck (ps oi hate rap so that brought the score down)