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[SRM Transformers 4 Part 1]

Holy smokes!

That superlineman sure is a voice actor prodigy. He makes the movie! >w>

Good work, can't wait for part two, and to know why I voice acted what I did for said part two. Keep up the good work and all. :3

"Urgayurgayug=rgayurgaybvbbvbv"lol. Boy I hope that doesn't mark my review up for spam. Save meh!

But seriously, awesome work as always.

Battosai810 responds:

Nah, I won't mark you down. Thanks for lending your voice to this toon, noone but you could be Ratchet, Soundwave or Shockwave so well.

[SRM Transformers 3]

TIME FOR FIRST COMMENT!!!

Who's that awesome voice actor who does the 3 best voiced characters!?

He sounds kewl. :3

Lol...great end to the season man, glad I could help the whole of the journey. Good luck with more! HAAH! *pose-EXPLOSIONS!!!!*

Battosai810 responds:

I have the oddest feeling you'll be doing VO for me in the future as well...
Thanks for the review mang

[The Real World!]

Awesome

Pure fucking amazing. No more info needed.

Battosai810 responds:

many thanks!
glad you enjoyed it

[Adult Swim Bumps Parody]

its finally on NG!!!

ill have those ads done eventually dude...till then..read whats there and enjoy! (when i get those ads done and in, i want co-author...lol)

Bkid001 responds:

co-author my ass, lol...nah just kiddin...well, you've seen the flash waay before it was submitted, so you knew what to expect...I also knew what to expect as far as what you voted on it =P...but yea, thanks for the review ^_^ (I will forever say that to people1!11!!1)

[Cookie man]

haha...this was a good 1st flash!

granted i had to have my headphones on max just to HEAR anything...and the art wasnt amazing...but u showed that u put enpugh work into it to give it a pass into NG...even if it isnt that popular...its still good for a 1st. good job man.

thejuiceizloose responds:

Yea, the sound gave me problems the entire time. All we have is a crappy microphone and a very basic sound program. So, hopefully in the near future we can aquire better equipment for the sound. Thanks for the critique.

[AbsoluteZero]

this is really good for a 1st submission dude...

I WANA SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT DAMNIT!!!

ok now to tips...

i have 5 things on NG now so i kno what people like and dont like..
1-make the characters bigger....trust me, even if they get a tiny bit pixilly...still worth it

2-drop that landing noise...its too loud and it is a little distracting

3-heres a big one....USE ONION SKIN!!! i cannot stress the importants of fluid animation..people will rip u apart if they see shaky animation..this is ur 1st so im expecting u to get a break...

4-more action...u didnt have enough battle..

5-let the reader click a next button..some of the text went too fast....if u cant..just instant message or e-mail me...ill gladly help you

6-add a pre-loader...NG has one that is very easy to use...so use it..makes a difference...

hope to see more of this...wow...u just got my longest review...hope i helped ya out a little =) good luck!

TideofDarkness responds:

Lol yea, thanks.. I can use all of the tips i can get. Still trying to learn some of the basics.. I really need to start to read up on action script. And I'm pretty sure I did add a preloader..

and i might take you up on your offer

[Kirby's Fight Full Movie]

it was better than anything i could do but...

i do have complaints. 1st is that the animation wasnt the best. tweening (though im terrible at it) would have probobly been the better choice there. 2nd was the choice in music. it was a little to girly or animeish (nothing against anime or girls) lol. and 3rd is that when he got the sword...he didnt use the sword, which was kinda odd. anyway good job but try a little harder. ill give ya a 4

BORKOYz responds:

rightio

[Asteroids Tutorial]

that was great

easy to follow, and the music...well, i didnt really like the music. but i had a huge problem. when you say how to put in the action script or instanceName or whatev, i dont kno where to do this. PLEASE E-MAIL ME OR I WILL NEVER ACOMPLISH ANYTHING!!!!! HELP PLEASE I REALLY WANT TO KNOW I WANT TO MAKE A GAME SO BAD HELP MEEEE!!!!!!! *explodes* ok thank you!

64 responds:

Down below everything else, almost to the Windows bar at the bottom, there is an "ActionScript" tab and "Properties" tab. You'll see it from there.